Couple of graphical things that you split test.

#1 Put the opt-in form above the fold rather than at the bottom.

#2 Find a graphics guy prepared to make you an ecover so that you can get your name branded on the report.

Also if you get a cover done you can start to submit the book to the many giveaway sites.

Hope this helps.

I will like to take you up on your offer for a free critique of a squeeze page I just built. The product is remedial reading software packaged in modules for slow learners. The link to that page is http://www.trinidadandtobagobusiness.com/reader.html
Also am about to test the headline, nothing else is changed in this version.
http://www.trinidadandtobagobusiness.com/reader1.html

Thanks for the offer.

Tony